Feedback on Film Rough Cut

I found the feedback from my target audience very useful. They allowed me to see how I can change my film to make it more realistic and appealing to them and others of a similar age. They indicated that I should try and put filters on some of my shots to make them darker as many of them are too bright, this is something I will hopefully achieve to make my film more appropriate for the thriller genre. Someone raised the idea of adding more transitions which is something I will think about doing, if I can find convincing transitions and not really extravagant ones as I feel this will ruin the tense mood/vibe that my film attempts to give off. Everyone that gave feedback seemed to like the music used in my film so I will keep that how it is. The typography was praised so I will keep the same typography and effects yet I will add a few more titles as I feel my film has too few.