Rough Cut of Film- Overview

This is the first rough cut of my film. I have decided to make a lot of changes to my film. First of all the ending is far too rushed so I am going to re-film a lot of that to make it look more realistic and more intense. The first minute is quite boring as it includes a lot of shots of just my character walking through a field with not much really happening. To overcome this I'm going to change, not all of my shots, but re-film some scarier looking shots that give more of a feeling of the character being followed. These shots may include some feet with big boots coming out through the bushes, or a blurred figure in the distance. I need to re-film the shot of the victims feet as she is dragged into the car as I feel it looks too unrealistic and staged, to make it look more realistic I may actually ask someone to pull her into the car. Many of my shots are too jumpy and need transitions in between them so my film flows better. I'm going to try and use an effect on the camera to film a shot of my character walking along the road with a blurred car in the background. I think once I have added these effective transitions and re-filmed parts to make the film more interesting and convincing, then my media product will be considerably better.